My weekend

It was early in the morning my Dad woke me up and said we are going surfing.  In a flash we were out surfing Pines.  It was super big but I still went out, loads of sets came through but I was waiting for that one perfect set. Here it was, it was a small wave that had some power in it... shhhhhhh it was coming. I quickly stood up and then...I was in a barrel it hollowed out on me as I was carving on the green face.  It quickly threw me off but I still got one.  I rushed into shore.  "Ouch", I said as I hit my knee on a rock.

We were driving home, when I said "Can we go to Sequence please?"
"Fine", said Dad.  We had reached our destination and I quickly hopped out of the car and walked inside.  The first thing I saw was the smooth stars.  I quickly said "Dad, you should get a Smooth Star".

Dad looked at the price and said that $399 was a lot of money.  He said ok and he got the Smooth Star and we walked out.

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  1. Hi my name is Cooper from Kaniere School. I like your writing it is very nice I like the weekend one it sounds very cool.

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  2. Thankyou I appreciate it

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